Sunday, May 31, 2009

"I WALKED UPON THE SAND"

Once I walked upon the sand,
my brother and I hand in hand.
Made fires and camped you know,
where no longer any one can go.
Ate fish that washed upon the sand,
from shrimp boats we could see,
when we would stand.
Dug holes so deep,
so children we could see.
So we could protect them you know,
from the depths from down below.
Woken up late at night,
to be told we had no right,
to dig holes that might,
hurt others within their right.
So we laughed and laughed you know,
as we refilled the holes so no one would know.
The fun we had on the sand,
my brother and I hand in hand.

Once I walked upon the sand,
my lover and I hand in hand.
Snot nosed sister walked behind,
knowing that our relationship ,
was something fine.
My lover and I talked upon those sands,
knowing that we would always be,
hand in hand.
We loved each other,
as lovers should,
and hoped one day
we could have children,
maybe not so soon.
The children they did come,
and for a long time,
I was not able to walk upon the sands,
with my lover hand in hand.

Once I walked upon the sand,
my Parrin and I hand in hand.
Drank beer so slow,
knewing that he would know.
How we felt upon his death,
as we realated on his life,
and what he ment to us this night.
How I remember his hands,
showing me the things,
I didn't understand.
He was one heck of a man,
my grandfather,
whom I called Grandpaw.
He showed me how to use bread,
to catch fish instead,
of using other things that I had read.
He showed me how to trap,
nutria and other things,
still in their beds.
As strang as this my seem,
he was the world to me.
And although I never walked,
upon the sands,
with him hand in hand,
I will always know,
he loved me so.

So I hope for all of you,
to one day walk,
with some one you love,
hand in hand,
upon the sand.

By Peter Collins

12 comments:

  1. LOVE THIS ONE TO BROTHER! YOU ARE ONE TALENTED
    MAN MY BROTHER!

    LU
    RONNIE

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  2. another awesome one!!!!
    but who is the snot nosed sister....
    not me, must be C!

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  3. OK...PETER!!!! IF YOU FREAKING TELL ME THAT YOU WROTE THIS 10 DAMN YEARS AGO, I AM GOING TO GO APE SH..!!! I MADE A COMMENT, JUST A FEW WEEKS AGO, ABOUT BEING SNOT NOSED AND ADMIRING YOU AND CHERYL WALKING ON THE BEACH; GO BACK AND READ EVERYONE...IT'S THERE, I PROMISE!!! I KNOW THAT I AM THE SNOT NOSED SISTER YOU ARE TALKING ABOUT, BUT IF THIS WAS NOT A RECENT WRITING THAN I AM TRULY FREAKING SCARED!!!

    I REMEMBER IT JUST LIKE IT WAS YESTERDAY BECAUSE CHERYL WAS DANCING IN THE SAND (YOU ALL KNOW THAT I'VE ALWAYS LOVED BALLERINAS) AND SHE WAS MY LIVE BALLERINA...PLEASE TELL ME THIS IS NOT FROM 10 YEARS AGO....I'M SURE YOU JUST THOUGHT OF THIS ONE, HUH???

    I AM TOUCHED, HOWEVER, THAT YOU CHOOSE MY SNOT NOSE AS YOUR CHARACTER...

    ALL MY LOVE,
    SNOTTY C

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  4. Thanks Ronnie but I never thought of myself or my writtings as being any thing that was talent or special. Ii has always been just something I enjoy doing. H _ _ l most people can't even figure out what it is I writting about. But thank you just the same.

    Lilly you are right the snot nosed one is Celena. Cheryl and I had taken her to the beach with us. See I used to be a nice guy at one time. (LOL)

    Celena I do remember that day but I must admit you are the one who inspired me to add that part to the poem. I remembeed what you had wrote in that comment. I was amazed that YOU remember such a small occasion when you were so young. But no I didn't write this 10 years ago. So don't go Ape S _ _ T over it.

    Just to let all of you know, I wrote this piece Sunday in about 2 hours. It just came to me. Any quetions ????? Let me know.

    L-U-A,
    Peter
    P.S.Or maybe it was Saturday???? I don't know.

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  5. I FOUND IT!!! LOOK ON BROTHER'S BLOG OF APRIL 29TH...I COMMENTED ABOUT MY SNOT FACE BEING WITH THEM ON THE BEACH...SHIT...I'M STILL CONCERNED!!

    SNOTTY C

    P.S. DID Y'ALL KNOW THAT I STILL HAVE A SNOTTY NOSE???? EVERYTIME I GO SOMEWHERE I ALWAYS HAVE A "SNOT CHECK" (INSTEAD OF SPELLCHECK...HAHAHAHA)

    I KNOW...AS NENA WOULD SAY, "FRUITCAKE!!!"

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  6. oh, i remember when C posted that snot-nosed piece,
    now I am pissed, why didn't ya'll bring me to the beach?!!
    Probably daddy didn't let, he didn't trust any of ya'll except Veronica with me, i was his most expensive child to keep alive and he wasn't about to loose me to an undertow because my brother was in love....

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  7. NOW YOU DID IT BROTHER. YOU GOT LILLY WONDERING WHY SHE DIDN'T GO TO THE BEACH WITH "SNOT NOSE C"! MAYBE IF YOU WOULD HAVE HAD A "SNOT NOSE" LIL YOU WOULD HAVE BEEN INVITED TO GO!

    LU
    RONNIE

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  8. Lilly, you probably didn't come because you were already being babied and spoiled by some one else. And we wanted Celena to have a turn siense you were hogging all the attention all the time any way.(LOL)

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  9. yeah, you are right..
    some things never change, huh?
    Still hogging all the attention hahahaha

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  10. Beautiful poem, Uncle Peter!

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